Ficlet: had it coming
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snick_backuphad it coming, Dean/Bela, 169 words, rated R
Much to my surprise, I have written a wee ficlet for Porn Battle XIV. I was inspired by the expectation that fics only be one comment long (although this is considerably shorter than that). It's for![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
gryfndor_godess, of course.
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These are the hands of a thief on his skin; they trail down his belly like mist. They don’t poke or prod, though he might have expected it of her; he doubted whether their usual antagonism would get left at the door tonight, but her nails barely graze him.
These hands lift jewels from casings as smoothly as he chambers a round, and more lightly. They catch hold of him, but the grip is like satin, like foam. In her hand he’s all heat and flesh and unspent juices, but there’s nothing in her touch that’s going to help him spend them. She holds him like she’d hold some piece of fruit, delectable but easily bruised. She gloats over him like she would money. She teases him with one long silky stroke of her thumb, and he shudders, and her smile stretches wider.
There are far worse things done to a man than poke at his tender places, and she’s going to do every one of them to him.
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Much to my surprise, I have written a wee ficlet for Porn Battle XIV. I was inspired by the expectation that fics only be one comment long (although this is considerably shorter than that). It's for
gryfndor_godess, of course.~~
These are the hands of a thief on his skin; they trail down his belly like mist. They don’t poke or prod, though he might have expected it of her; he doubted whether their usual antagonism would get left at the door tonight, but her nails barely graze him.
These hands lift jewels from casings as smoothly as he chambers a round, and more lightly. They catch hold of him, but the grip is like satin, like foam. In her hand he’s all heat and flesh and unspent juices, but there’s nothing in her touch that’s going to help him spend them. She holds him like she’d hold some piece of fruit, delectable but easily bruised. She gloats over him like she would money. She teases him with one long silky stroke of her thumb, and he shudders, and her smile stretches wider.
There are far worse things done to a man than poke at his tender places, and she’s going to do every one of them to him.
Original entry posted at Dreamwidth. Feel free to reply here or there. (
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Date: 2013-01-21 07:53 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2013-01-21 09:01 am (UTC)Mmmm, lovely image. Dean/Bela is so hot, the world needs more of it :)
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Date: 2013-01-21 04:00 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2013-01-21 08:17 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2013-01-21 10:53 pm (UTC)ALKADJFLAKJDFLKAJDFLKJALDFJALKDJFLAJDFLAJSLDFJALDFJALFHWAHEFJALKDSJFLAJDLFJA
I LOVE THIS SO MUCH, THANK YOU. It's so in-character and so sexy, and I just want to hug my computer. No but actually: I woke up insanely early today (well, 5:45 AM) to go to the inauguration, and this was one of the first things I saw because I always check my email and LJ before getting out of bed, and it totally helped energize me into getting up at such an awful hour, and then I purposely kept the page open on my phone because I knew I wouldn't have 3G in DC with the crowds and wouldn't be able to get back to it, and then when I was bored during during the day, I got out my phone to re-read. And I was THIS CLOSE to sticking my phone in my BFFs' faces and going, "LOOK WHAT MY FRIEND WROTE FOR ME," and I totally would have (they're very understanding of my SPN obsession, so it would not have been as weird as it sounds) if it had been G-rated. *g*
he doubted whether their usual antagonism would get left at the door tonight, but her nails barely graze him.
These hands lift jewels from casings as smoothly as he chambers a round, and more lightly.
There are far worse things done to a man than poke at his tender places, and she’s going to do every one of them to him.
I think these three are my favorites? It's so haaarrrddd to choose, but I can't quote back the entire thing, so I think these are my ~official favorite lines.
♥
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Date: 2013-01-23 06:36 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2013-01-24 05:21 pm (UTC)I am of course THRILLED that you liked it so well! I do feel a little bad that I wrote you something so short that your comment was longer than the fic. But it turns out the fic is also so short that it doesn't qualify for
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Date: 2013-01-24 05:23 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2013-01-24 05:30 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2013-01-25 02:12 pm (UTC)Lovely work, I really like this. :)
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Date: 2013-01-26 01:14 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2013-01-26 04:47 pm (UTC)I'm crying tears of blood, TBH.
which means I shall have to write more Dean/Bela later.
You have no idea how much I wanted to say something along the lines of, "And you know that writing Dean/Bela so well means you should write more, right?" But I refrained, lest peer pressure make you less likely to want to write. *g* But WOOT, MORE DEAN/BELA. \O/